tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4084249946014888400.post107709956056899413..comments2023-10-10T04:12:46.727-07:00Comments on Idle Musings...: Adrift...Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4084249946014888400.post-86410913496507770592010-10-09T12:14:48.119-07:002010-10-09T12:14:48.119-07:00You can add the following stanzas to it:-
Now fee...You can add the following stanzas to it:-<br /><br />Now feeling all distraught and lost,<br />She thought she had paid too big a cost<br />Chasing dreams of baubles and shiny objects,<br />Her greatest fear now is losing all that she begets<br /><br />Perhaps the motive was wrong but the path was right,<br />Trailblazers have always had to struggle and fight<br />This path will lead her to something invaluable,<br />In time, her ordeal will be an immortal fable<br /><br />To think of hearth and home is but natural,<br />Often we feel that all that’s done is for null<br />Not impossible to find solace if material things are amiss,<br />For wise men have said, home is where the heart is<br /><br />Finally, we can only hope, that the truth will dawn,<br />Her past comforts too were shiny objects to come upon<br />The joy lies in the process that is the epiphany,<br />Especially if you have someone else for companyChimyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08299674728401995496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4084249946014888400.post-50345937261319288062010-05-05T10:53:30.671-07:002010-05-05T10:53:30.671-07:00Wow... It has a different depth. Can relate to it ...Wow... It has a different depth. Can relate to it many aspects. Well written. I only wish it was not written in free verse...DEEPTIhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16874775124188016734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4084249946014888400.post-36567764049330681572010-04-27T20:25:51.717-07:002010-04-27T20:25:51.717-07:00@Ishita: Glad you liked it :D@Ishita: Glad you liked it :DManasi Dhanorkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01918455940204140971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4084249946014888400.post-46027364500076753922010-04-26T13:04:38.217-07:002010-04-26T13:04:38.217-07:00kudos well written!kudos well written!Inishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04785537882361246474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4084249946014888400.post-89156951694320822652010-04-26T12:59:44.545-07:002010-04-26T12:59:44.545-07:00A & Neha: Thanks :DA & Neha: Thanks :DManasi Dhanorkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01918455940204140971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4084249946014888400.post-89799232521928320252010-04-26T11:55:16.821-07:002010-04-26T11:55:16.821-07:00well written ya...! :)well written ya...! :)Nehahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16125711969329683134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4084249946014888400.post-34051467262411958332010-04-26T10:33:28.096-07:002010-04-26T10:33:28.096-07:00Very nice :) -AVery nice :) -AAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com